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Это точно клип не на 5, но автор вроде бы старался и 3 ставить не хочется. 4 только из уважению к труду и потраченному времени.

C моими глазами произошло тоже самое, что и с глазом чувака в районе 1:20. 3

Неплохо, но как-то рандомно и из-за этого теряется атмосфера.

Зато всеобщее внимание, чёрный пиар - тоже пиар.

Andrew-sama написал(а):
60 fps -ная дробилка. Выглядит противно. Чисто из уважения за труды - 4-

Even if I could barely understand anything because I don't understand russian and translator doesn't help that much, thank you for your honesty and for rating!

Даже если бы я мог едва понять что-либо, потому что я не понимаю русский и переводчик не поможет, что много, спасибо вам за вашу честность и рейтинг!

Извините за мой русский, я использовал переводчик

60 fps -ная дробилка. Выглядит противно. Чисто из уважения за труды - 4-

плагиат полнейший

-Kisagi- написал(а):
Not my cup of tea. Although it looks cool, but that's all it is

Thank you for your input on it, after all AMVs are made for entertainment, some might watch and say it looks cool, others may dislike and bash on it, and I do realize this video isn't for everyone.
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Lapskaus написал(а):
I like how you stay all nice and friendly even though you get rather harsh critics and even some bashing. You're a good guy, please stay this way :>

Told you in the AMV.org forums what most people will say, but now you get to experience it first hand ;D

I can't say I didn't expect hate and " lolligerjoj wannabe " comments from the start such comments are well deserved because the video is indeed similar.

But it was something I always wanted to do, I loved doing it, and I can't say I'm not glad some people seem to enjoy it aswell ;)

Thank you for the honesty instead of mindless bashing, you're a good guy in my book aswell, stay awesome!

I like how you stay all nice and friendly even though you get rather harsh critics and even some bashing. You're a good guy, please stay this way :>

Told you in the AMV.org forums what most people will say, but now you get to experience it first hand ;D

Not my cup of tea. Although it looks cool, but that's all it is

Под конец как-то потерял ниточку синхры автор,а так отлично.

lolligerjoj написал(а):
Not a bad video by itself, and technically quite impressing. I personally do not enjoy the music too much though. I am quite optimistic about your own future ideas and look forward to them.

Thank you kindly for dropping by lolligerjoj!
Really gratefull for the support and I eagerly await your next masterpiece!


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Xophilarus написал(а):
Gonna do a follow up comment on my previous one, my opinion on the video remains the same, BUT I do think you can definitely make some cool stuff in the future. The editing in the video is pretty nicely done, it is just the idea is not really yours, which you recognize. I am excited for amvs you make in the future that are of your own ideas and such because I could see you making some really cool things. Especially since you seem to show desire to make original content in the future xP.

I highly value your take on this and thank you for taking the time to let me know what you think about my video, about me as an editor and also for seeing potential in me, looking foward to the future aswell
Stay awesome!

Какой то новый пресет вышел?

Gonna do a follow up comment on my previous one, my opinion on the video remains the same, BUT I do think you can definitely make some cool stuff in the future. The editing in the video is pretty nicely done, it is just the idea is not really yours, which you recognize. I am excited for amvs you make in the future that are of your own ideas and such because I could see you making some really cool things. Especially since you seem to show desire to make original content in the future xP.

Not a bad video by itself, and technically quite impressing. I personally do not enjoy the music too much though. I am quite optimistic about your own future ideas and look forward to them.

Eazy написал(а):
That is not true. The AMV Community is all about circlejerking. Will be much It harder to get honest opinions when you are known.
About your video, it's quite sad to see someone put so much effort into a copycat. (I like it tho). I just hope you do not get discouraged and make an original video with the same ammount of effort next time. I am totally looking forward to that.

I am indeed missing the most important thing in an AMV, being different and original, for the long learning process this took I based myself entirely on lolligerjoj's 3 AMVs because they were something I was and am fascinated about, nothing really came close to grasping my attention and admiration like his work did, wich, as a result, I ended up creating something too similar, hurting the final result of my own video.
I'm really glad you like it nontheless , and I surely won't get discouraged, I expected hate and " lolligerjoj wannabe " comments from the start, but I credited lolligerjoj in my videos description, he even commented on the video and asked for download links, I did this out of love for his work rather than wanting to take credit for his efforts.

thank you for the kind words!

MrNosec написал(а):
It's hard getting a honest, unbiased opinion when no one here knows you.

This is not true. The AMV Community is all about circlejerking. It will be much harder to get honest opinions when you are known.

About your video, it's quite sad to see someone put so much effort into a copycat. (I like it tho). I just hope you don't get discouraged and make an original video with the same ammount of effort next time. I am totally looking forward to that.

lol if you copied this much, you might as well have had used the same song

Класс

просто кровавая нарезка из широкоизвестных тайтлов, без идей. Ева вообще не к месту здесь смотрится

Changelling написал(а):
Similarities between videos is almost never ignored, and it takes a lot points away because of lack of originality. But if I was to ignore the similarities with Lolligerjoj's videos I'd say this was a nice video and I liked it a lot, but when I miss it I will probably re-watch ITL instead.

Thank you for the kind words, glad you enjoyed my first attempt at making an AMV.
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lokkiclu написал(а):
Very similar to Into the Labyrinth as far as idea and effects go, but I give you props for putting in the effort to make it 60fps

Thank you, I agree my inspiration source is more than obvious and it ended up hurting the final result of my video, but this being my first attempt at making an AMV I still have alot to learn.
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ThalesEditions написал(а):
Originality question In, this is bad, so bad, cause lolli style and labyrinth scenes are here, obviously appear be a rip.
But only, to ONLY ONLY, in twixtor technique he exceeded the labyrinth. Has potential in He this point ^^
MrNosec, the critical comments are essential to you see where you missed and then you come to do a amv with original style futurely yourself. Do not been necessary a horror, psychedelic or something. There are a lot of categories and you can use any of it. That you create Since something original, mainly if it go to a AMV CONTEST!
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So here come my critical:
-As a lot of people already said, the synchronism in some parts are out of ritm, mainly in RGB Split begin on .
The pattern synchronism of video lost it several times essence.
-There are visual pollution in video, the great part of amv. The RGB Split after middle time, has no mildness, and with a big amount too. If you repared in labyrinth, lolli applied it with a high speed, mildness and with a small amount of it. To not disturb Just the viewer.
There are a lot of distortion in same time too. Could have a better rate in effects if you had invested each effects for one synchronism type. Have a better Could organization.
-The Edition is too low. "Part of Envagelion, Part of Monogatari ...". Would taken a It better selection of scene, if you had related some scenes between animes.
-Audio, For me when you put the "slay it", the mood was broken, without any mildness :(
So..there are a lot of and I know critical that people from all world could say it to you and then you will better as time and training.
But never give up, looks to that as something that you have to do to grow up as AMVMaker. Take my 4. And I wait for more videos from you ^^

For the long learning process this took I based myself entirely on lolligerjoj's 3 AMVs because they were something I was and am fascinated about, nothing really came close to grasping my attention and admiration like his work did, wich, as a result, I ended up creating something too similar, hurting the final result of my own video. I highly value your take on this and thank you for taking the time to let me know what you think and basically review this video and my work, keep up the good work!
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NakkiD написал(а):
author as I am a fan of lolligerjoj
I understand .. but the video is a clear rip-off on the work lolligerjoj, all from the staff and ending with music, even the style of the same ..
http://www.youtube.com/user/lolligerjoj1/videos

I agree with everything you just said, I am pretty new at making AMVs and I admit lolligerjoj was the main reason I started editing AMVs at all, thank you :)
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Turbo написал(а):
Не смотря на то что хотелось увидеть что-то в стиле Into The Labyrinth ещё раз. Данная попытка слишком вторична: много похожих, а иногда и тех же сцен взятых из того же аниме, визуально выглядит почти один в один за небольшими исключениями и даже часть с поворотами лиц есть, музыка того же стиля. При всем этом клип уступает оригиналу и по монтажке: провалы в синхре - отсутствие явной последовательности происходящего, что в некотором виде было в оригинале.

Что могло бы сделать клип лучше? Мне кажется достаточно было исключить все что касается Gatari или как минимум полностью выкинуть сцены, которые использовались в лабиринте. В таком виде клип уже где-то на грани плагиата.

I am indeed missing the most important thing in an AMV, being different and original, for the long learning process this took I based myself entirely on lolligerjoj's 3 AMVs because they were something I was and am fascinated about, nothing really came close to grasping my attention and admiration like his work did, wich, as a result, I ended up creating something too similar, hurting the final result of my own video. I did this for fun and out of love for his work rather than wanting to take credit for his efforts.
Thank you for your honest opinion :)
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dayton написал(а):
Into the Trash Bin.

Отличное название, ибо повторяет вторичность вторичного исполнителя вторичным видеорядом, вторичной цк, да даже .bin это бинарные файлы, вон как много смысла. Задумайтесь о будущем, о вашем мозге, вы все вторичные от ваших родителей, вы всего-лишь биомусор!111

Нет, ну а че, как назовешь корабль, туда его и загонит судьба.

Thank you for your honest input, and I am indeed missing the most important thing in an AMV, being different and original, for the long learning process this took I based myself entirely on lolligerjoj's 3 AMVs, and ended up creating something to similar.
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XhimeAMVs написал(а):
omg this is totally amazing 5/5 for you man

So glad you enjoyed!
Thank you and stay awesome!

its just twixtor LOL

1nfringer написал(а):
1:45 - 2:20 - just perfect!
Plagiarism is not a rip-off - made quality, the effects perfectly matched, kept on track with Pyaterochka, so I do not regret a great score!

Thank you very much for the opinion :)
It's hard getting a honest, unbiased opinion when no one here knows you.

Similarities between videos is almost never ignored, and it takes a lot points away because of lack of originality. But if I was to ignore the similarities with Lolligerjoj's videos I'd say this was a nice video and I liked it a lot, but when I miss it I will probably re-watch ITL instead.

Всем привет - привет всем.
Здесь будет написано моё сугубо,.. сугубо субъективное мнение.
33 секунда, момент затянутый поэтому не помешало бы обыграть мелодию, а не просто устроит "скачки напряжения"
Мужик, с нереалистично хлещущей кровью из глаз, эффектно выступил.
Некоторые резкие, выделяющиеся звуковые скачки " 3 удара 4-й хлопок" не были обыграны, просто некое дрожание фильтра\ маски\футажа, ф.з.
01:03 рывок девушки слишком длинный на мой взгляд, появляется рассинхрон, может у меня что-то не то...
Начиная с 01:05 здорово смотрится, тут уже дрожание подходит под звуковой ключ.
Сюжета, или же толковой смысловой нагрузки не увидел,
но для такого трека это не главное, если не последнее, тут важнее синха и умение чувствовать музыку, чтобы качественно её обыграть.
Ах, вот ещё что, на мой взгляд, страдания тут некая обыденность и это странно, если подумать.
Мелодия нейтральная, частое фигурирование на её фоне сцен насилия, кровопускания, наряду с улыбающимися лицами, наталкивает на мысль, что кому-то очень плохо.
Как-то так-то.
Спасибо за внимание.)

Хоть не моя музыка, но обыграна круто. Плаавный тру моушн

Господи, опять эта непонятная дерганая картинка под дабстеп. Не понимаю, кому это может нравится? Смотреть невозможно, чуть глаза не вытекли от этих долбаных эффектов и переходов!
б/о

In originality question, this is bad, so bad, cause lolli style and labyrinth scenes are here, obviously appear be a rip.

But only, ONLY, in twixtor technique he exceeded the labyrinth. He has potential in this point ^^

MrNosec, the critical comments are essential to you see where you missed and then you come to do a original amv with yourself style futurely. Don't been necessary a horror, psychedelic or something. There are a lot of categories and you can use any of it. Since that you create something original, mainly if it go to a AMV CONTEST!
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So here come my critical:
-As a lot of people already said, the synchronism in some parts are out of ritm, mainly in RGB Split on begin.
The pattern synchronism of video lost it essence several times.
-There are visual pollution in video, the great part of amv. The RGB Split after middle time, has no mildness, and with a big amount too. If you repared in labyrinth, lolli applied it with a high speed, mildness and with a small amount of it. Just to not disturb the viewer.
There are a lot of distortion in same time too. Could have a better rate in effects if you had invested each effects for one synchronism type. Could have a better organization.
-The edition is low too. "Part of Envagelion, Part of Monogatari...". It would taken a better selection of scene, if you had related some scenes between animes.
-Audio, for me when you put the "slay it", the mood was broken, without any mildness :(

So..there are a lot of critical and I know that people from all world could say it to you and then you will better as time and training.
But never give up, looks to that as something that you have to do to grow up as AMVMaker. Take my 4. And I wait for more videos from you ^^

Very similar to Into the Labyrinth as far as idea and effects go, but I give you props for putting in the effort to make it 60fps

из разряда, свой Into The Labyrinth с блэкджеком и Евой, но как-то безвкусно и бессмысленно получилось, все таки оригинал был гораздо более продуманный и выверенный, хоть и слишком затянутый, но самое главное что он производил впечатление, но второй раз тоже самое(только на порядок хуже), уже совершенно не впечатляет, к сожалению фантазии автора хватило лишь на то, что бы добавить еще больше кишков и Еву